we could have burned.
tidal obliquity
perfume of your
nascent rejection
lingers near
syllables still cling
to ear, barely hear
breath from ashes
Perihelion
precession
torque, force
me to behave
open discourse
Morse code, of course
we were wounded.
bottom has never felt
so coarse, hoarse
from feeding remorse
another antrorse.
tiger tusk powdered
upon gilded grievance
angelic remnant refuse
refused to note
confusion savaged back
upon illusion, your intrusion
jack-jawed sibilance
scurry meth-maddened
mechanics of apsis
aperture, until I fall asleep
defenseless in ambition
Wp=mgr/Iw
your angular nature
brings moments of inertia
vectors and tensors
depend all on
Euclid’s perspective.
I thought you knew
everything nutated
vernal equinox, orientations
not fixed.
result of attraction.
am I as
confusing
as you?
hope, predication
proposition
expression.
you have to figure it out
image courtesy of Pinterest and Edouard Boubat
A deep felt poem with incredible words and the dialect is gripping.
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Thanks Charlie!🙏🖤
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You are so welcome my friend. 🙂
By the way, I wrote something quite sad.
I think you’ll really enjoy something different from me.
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I have read it and it was quite morose. Interesting new style. You are so damn brilliant my friend. Are you experimenting in the same manner as the cut-up work or is this a new direction?
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A new direction. No cut up. What you read all comes from my own broken heart. No experimentation whatsoever.
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no man, a broken heart? recent? I’d go cry in some beers with you if I could bro
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Not recent…just thinking and mourning of those I lost 2 years ago. It hit me and just broke me that’s all.
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I’m sorry Charlie. Seems to be driving some amazing creativity from you!
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Yep. A lot is coming out of my head.
There’s more of what I’ve been writing. I’ll post them like usual. Trust me you’ll relate.
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I believe I will bruv 🍻
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Cheers!
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You’re on a bit of a roll again!
I feel like I’ve just been saying Wow for the last hour!
(Wp=mgr/Iw… I’m no math expert but this looks very much like an OP invention 🤓 I am basically Captain Obvious wrapped in general bewilderment)
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Wp=mgr/Iw. Hahahaha it was all sexy syllables til here then a grouchy boss hmphed over the paperwork angry of distraction… No, I don’t utilize that formula that I’m aware of.
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It’s more influential than you might think. Good to hear from you Mr Jones
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Oh I investigated what the relationship mean t. (Formula in physics)
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👍👍
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