There is blood in the indecision
Ineffectual in effigy
The loss stains the water
mayhem comes before
form of thought and action
corals, pale blues
finger upon cold lips
a radiance too dark
finds history in current
life just below the surface
a glamour of perspective
honesty is brutal
rippling reflections
waves carry a secret
until encountering break
red droplets of regression
palette silver anguish of green
cut to the quick, knowing
of life in-between
image courtesy of Pinterest
Another wow Dennis, that first line is a novel of truth in itself.
(and what about sun showers? I love those. I was just noticing your tag line)
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Thanks V. Sun showers are very nice 💚
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the best kind for green hearts 😁
I don’t know what the hell I’m saying, it’s getting late here lol
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Lmao 😘
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aww xo
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Mind blowing.
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Thank you so much Devika!🙏
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Your poem here speaks the harsh brutal truth and wow!
Miss reading your work my friend. And I’m back! back also with a brand new poem. 🙂
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Thanks Charlie, and so happy you’ve returned!!
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You are welcome my friend. 🙂 I’m always happy to hear from you my friend. 🙂
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You as well 🤙
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🙂 Bless you my friend.
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And you 🙏
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Dark and creepy but brilliant too.
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Thank you 🙏
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You are Welcome.
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Reblogged this on A Global Divergent Literary Collective and commented:
Olde Punk
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Reblogged this on erichmichaels and commented:
A folding of forms by Oldepunk at ramjetpoetry. A quiet sense of desolation conveyed in beautiful imagery and tone.
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Thank you for the kind words and for sharing Erich 🙏
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My pleasure…my friend!
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Wow!! Amazing!
cut to the knowing
of living in-between
I love those lines.
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Thanks Eric🙏🍻
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Hypnotizing
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thanks so much dear friend
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Wow
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Thank you very much 🙏🖤
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