Thus it holds true; a steady course
nautilus man-made percussion of actions
manipulate dense framework as starving bird stares
through the window
educational tour of laughing matter
Would like to return home
wherever it may be, the road
is long and hard so whisper to me
feel this sorrow
I wish I knew how to grieve
without a need to borrow
we decay anyway
soulful approaches whimper in fear to drums
what is loved most?
what is hated least?
sensing a sensational sensation, I ask
am I making any sense?
We watch children prey
with handgun heartbeats
even the devil dwells
with remorse
hidden door to open answer
analyze reason as changing color schemes
to shades of gray and steel
not a continuation
I know when but not the why
incision collision peace of mind
star search for less
someone else to blow
hide me in shadow cast by
ruined sky, forever lost somewhere
God, we grow cold
How amusing is death
of a comedian?
Try to answer that question dear friend
I rend with fury so please stay a while
examine my intelligence and then
tell me what I need to know
how much is it? Is it enough for you?
Thought not for naught in knots
an omniscient mutilation, omnipotent godhead
knife in back as we bound and bludgeon
curators of dark and narrow
swim a lake of tears
sail on seas of sin
are you a mighty sailor?
I was only a boy of ten
verbal assaults burn both ends
watch her slowly lose her lease on life
go about your own as if it didn’t happen
You can see it on my Snapchat, this
entourage of jesters amid courts of wealthy
a deception of healthy help and kindness
cut bonds and free the prisoner
DNA math hall connections
Alliteration of life an allegorical play
count numbers of the dead
on your lottery ticket t-shirt
why are we treated this way?
Sword hand sore in sullen silence
powers to create also power to destroy
marksman awaits quarry
death has so much patience
I fail again as there is no doubt
a lost cause cannot be found
pressure extremity, disappointment
mistrusted misunderstood misleading
myopic to hell with it all
the fruits of labor atone wisdom
tainted by black winds
of suffering, we endure
still we follow
shimmering allure
eye for an eye
tooth for a tooth
I don’t flinch when you die
I have become despondent
there, that is the truth
image courtesy of Pinterest
I read three times– my conclusion is that this is literally about life and death and love and loss and that I needed to read three times because it is vast and enormous. A little blown away my friend.
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Wow,.Thank you Christine. I’m really pleased that you like it. It’s the first of a few more ambitious poems I’ve been working on.
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It certainly is ambitious! Of course, my interpretation of it could be completely off but there really felt like there was something primal about the human condition expressed there through the lens of your own life. I am having a hard time expressing what I want to say but I feel like I want to go back and read it again and see what else it reveals.
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Then I have succeeded in being provocative!
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Indeed!
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And I was right– it does reveal more at each read.
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🙏
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Reblogged this on Brave and Reckless and commented:
This somehow felt almost to big for me to hold.
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Thank you!
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Deep evocative
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Thank you yassy
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Welcome Oldep
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I must say, you write some heavy duty stuff! Life and death all rolled into one endless spiral! Dwight
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Why, thank you sir!
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Keep up the good work!
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