I’m cold as rain
Pain is my home
this sound of Armageddon
grey tremors abound
feeling for some meaning
as we watch eclipse
Pain is my home
sun is in the sky
there is a roof over my head
and a tomb in which I lie
It drips icicles of fire into my veins
and I lay upon a pyre
breathe in my smoking remains
Pain is my home
hither it comes, tearing me down
I feel it again
recourse in your gaze
we acquiesce to fear and what’s to be
highlands awash with our regrets
weather comes crashing in
pain is a solitary creature
From gift of Prometheus
I have felt no warmth, only flame
As I turn away from the sound
of my name, I take a longer way down
Choke on solace of my home, this place of pain
wait for storms
to wash tragedy away
know that my heartbreak sleeps
in cold light of day
Wonderful work! Great read.
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Thank you, really appreciate your readership!
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Amazing. It was just difficult to read because of the background. Really incredible write.
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Thanks Rob!
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Truly awesome read.
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Thank you!
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You’ve put into words the chords of a heart. Excellent.
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Thanks Kindra!
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Oh, you are most welcome!
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Amazing. Very well done!
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Thank you John 🙏
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Very powerful images
Solid and tight
As Sheldon Always
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Thank you!
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Damn Olde Punk. Powerful, heart wrenching prose but I hate where it comes from. Holding you in the light my friend.
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Thank you sister. It’s actually an older poem so it’s in the past😁
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Reblogged this on Sudden Denouement Literary Collective and commented:
Olde Punk/RamJet Poetry
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Superlative
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Thank you 🙏
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You are most welcome.
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Powerful and worthwhile poem. I had to read again. You made the situations and the character come alive.
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Thank you John
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Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
Please read and enjoy the work of a talented writer.
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Thanks for the reblog
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You are welcome.
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Well Done!
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Thank you Dwight 🙏
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You are welcome!
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Miss reading your work. Welcome back my friend. 🙂 Another brilliant and stunning visuals. 🙂
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Thanks Charlie. Working my way back 🙏
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You welcome my friend. Hope all is well with you. 🙂
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Amazing piece! Truly powerful work of art!
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Thanks my dear friend 🙏
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