Cynical in silence slaps the twilight
problems dance like fireflies in wind
a rueful play on words
crashing into inner soul
a mellow vision simmers in the summer heat
impractical in its own way
reminiscent of mistakes drawn from the deck
clouded mind fumbling thoughts of despair
the love on the way-side; stays hidden
waiting blindly for an answer
languid with rigorous activity
disperse the dream into many days
castles crumble into ruined bones
crystal lake turned to stagnant pools
and shadow clings to it all
lapse into unconscious chatter
about what may have caused the downfall
of the doorways
fortitude found inside the woman of jade
crimson honey runs from the scar
tinsel martyr sings for the lion
futile exodus from hell
it surrounds you
some mountains are unconquerable
escape is the near-sighted jest
encapsulating all of your options
meditate on life and draw your own conclusion
I have mine
she castrates our clemency
above and so bow down
strange worlds align to fight
severe the adverse slight
exit the lighted garden and
sink into primitive sleep
dwelling in black jungles deep
homicidal brain division
cross seas of mass confusion
toward a jewel flawed by teeth
whispers cut jagged into my beliefs
the hounds define my place
crimson honey on the palate
learn to hate the taste
what was that seventies pop delight? love stinks? the last line of yours” learn to hate the taste” sure does make me laugh to think how the other popped to mind. to know of the sweetness of longing yes, but to endure those other times cranky pants all oscaring about grouchy that something didn’t get communicated in a meaningful thus remembered way and this or proof worse it was never communicated at all and now troubles…. hurt feelings. remembered forever as in you yelled at me tuesday january sixteenth 43 years ago and now we’re going to cover why I’m wrong? woo hoo…not ah
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“Disperse the dream into many days.” My fav.
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Thanks Sam
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Holy hell this is profound! Not sure what star man Jones comment is about lol
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Starman exists on a higher plane than we do. It takes some time to get used to his answers. He is an interesting dude. Check him out sometime at almondcoffee
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I see
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Oh and thanks for reading Rob
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My pleasure
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I really like, “languid with rigorous activity.” How can we be so stuck with so much mind flutter? Like running in a dream, getting nowhere.
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Thank you and thanks for reading. I know, with our minds constantly being stimulated it always feels like we are exhausted despite perhaps not even being very active. It’s a crazy world. I appreciate your comment.
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Ciao bella domenica 🙂
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Thank you!💞
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“reminiscent of mistakes drawn from the deck…”
Just one profound line after another. Love it. But you make me need caffeine 🙂
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Lol😈
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Haha seriously, we’re in a bar at the beach (back in Australia now) watching the Superbowl, and I’m reading my beloved poets, and I’ve now ordered a coffee! Haha. It’s delicious, thank you. Cheers!
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Cheers! And G’day!
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🙂
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“whispers cut jagged into my beliefs/the hounds define my place/crimson honey on the palate” Wow– so much goodness here Old Punk!
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Thank you my friend 🙏
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Reblogged this on Kindra M. Austin and commented:
Another of Oldepunk’s to add to my collection of favorites.
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Thank you my friend 🙏❤
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Most welcome ❤
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It’s all been said but I’ll add… just amazing, the flow, the word choice, wow! I need my heart beat to slow down. Phew… great stuff ❤
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Thank you so much Laurie, I really appreciate your opinion. This is one of my personal favorites so it’s a little more rewarding to know people like it 🙏❤
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I really do! It’s a great one for sure! I love your writing style and this is a prime example of why it is so hard-hitting ❤
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😊💞
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❤
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A favorite of mine!
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🙏❤
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❤ ❤
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